That's a nice image for a story. Just not this one.
Maybe another time ...
Now, to continue from where we left off.
And, BTW, the story does have a title. The Traveler. No clue as to why, yet.
We FADE IN again:
MARIE
Dr. Richards? I had that dream again.
INT. DR. RICHARDS’ OFFICE - DAY
[Needs freakin scene description with freakin characters placed in it.]
MARIE
Thank you for making time to see me, doctor.
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