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Debbi Mack
Jan 12, 2025
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This could be Marie. (Image by ArturGórecki from Pixabay)

When we last left off, we asked the question, "Whatever Happened to Marie?".

So ... shall we see where this shitty first draft of a screenplay I completely forgot I wrote, but accidentally stumbled upon, goes next?

Why not?

EXT. CABIN - NIGHT

Marie approaches the cabin, looking around. The windows are curtained, but she tries to steal a peak peek inside.

An attractive YOUNG MAN opens the front door, sticks his head out, and silently watches Marie. She turns from the window, sees him, and issues a small “eek” while jumping.

YOUNG MAN
Hi there. Can I help you?

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